Only promising this time - the judge was quite hard but I paid for his opinion so he's entitled to give it!
The critiques were put up today, so heres his, as promised
MINOR PUPPY DOG
1. BLAKNGOLD DIZYGOTIC SPY 28/09/07
(*Ch. Sannjesa Crusty Demon AZ x Kasron Quality AZ) 3100196130
8 months, medium size medium strong, well pigmented, well coloured dog, the eyes should be a little darker, good breadth of the skull, good strength of the foreface, the stop should be a little more defined, still good reach of neck, slightly short slightly steep croup, the upper arm & shoulder blade should be better laid and longer, good length of forelegs, stands correct when viewed from the front, steps correct in the rear, even for the age the hocks should be firmer, steps correct from front, he has normal puppy looseness of the elbows, during movement, good drive & reach with a firm back.
ETA the judge was Mr. Louis Donald (SV)