You really can't properly do a critique without the dog in a PROPER stack. If he is a dog that cooperates and is easy going, you can move his feet into position while another person takes the pictures. There are a lot of threads on how to properly stack a dog.
One thing I notice is his eyes, they're too light. But he has nice tight pasterns. His croup looks a little short but that could be the stack job!
Tululajhs Red Chrome Kahpone~AST/APBT~CGC TT BH~RIP
Osyrius SilverChrome GTOVonMarionHaus~GSD~CGC DDJ RN
WBBs BleauChromeLady of TheCopa~APBT~STARR CGC