Thanks for your opinion!
I'm sorry you took issue with the second paragraph, both my dogs had been rescued from rescue organizations, my German shepherd was abandoned and left outside all the time and had mange when I received him and my Papillon was held up by the neck and had rocks thrown at him by teenage (15 year old) boys.
My local animal rescue wants me to come up with a good caption to support these animals , and the animals in our community. We will be trying to raise money to help the dogs in need with fleas,heartworms, tapeworms, ear mites,surgery,fixing ..etc. Animals come in every day unfixed with problems and are dropped off because they aren't wanted anymore, some people bring in puppies constantly every time their dog gets pregnant.
The caption needs to be perfect and I do appreciate any ideas, this picture and caption will be copied on to a 2x3 ft dimension if anyone wants to know the size it will be. I want the caption to not be offending but appropriate for this fund-raiser.