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10-18-2006, 11:05 PM
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Re: A fairy tale for my daughters when our Bryn passed
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That's beautiful. You need to have that illustrated and published as a children's book. [/ QUOTE ] I couldn't agree more! There is nothing out there to comfort a child grieving the loss of a beloved dog, and that beautiful little fairy tale would be wonderful for children of all ages. It was a joy to read, even through cloudy eyes ... thank you for sharing. |
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10-22-2006, 06:14 PM
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Re: A fairy tale for my daughters when our Bryn passed
I have a degree in English Lit, so I hope you'll believe me when I say that is some really wonderful creative writing. I'm touched by the imaginative freedom of language and rhythm. You definitely have a gift. Hope you'll keep writing more. I'd buy it. Others would too.
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10-28-2006, 11:46 PM
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Re: A fairy tale for my daughters when our Bryn passed
All I can say is I was crying reading that... truly moving.
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04-04-2007, 03:41 PM
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Re: A fairy tale for my daughters when our Bryn passed
That is a beautiful story. I too wish you would make a book of it. I would definatly buy one, and one for my doggie crazy friends.
I too sit here crying as I read.
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04-04-2007, 09:11 PM
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Re: A fairy tale for my daughters when our Bryn passed
That was absolutely incredible. I'm SOBBING...
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04-08-2007, 07:20 PM
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Re: A fairy tale for my daughters when our Bryn passed
*that* - the softAngel whispered to Dogdear - is so very beautiful!, how blessed a life you have had! - the people you owned must have loved you *so* very much. They saw magic in your snowtip, and your catBrother explained so much to us softAngels. We are so glad, and happy to have you here with us. We know its hard when we have to change from protector to Mentor, but soon you will be the Keeper of The Memory - and forever we will all dance, safe in the knowledge we travelled as one.
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06-22-2007, 10:05 AM
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Re: A fairy tale for my daughters when our Bryn passed
remifaere, have you decided to publish your fairy tale? It is the most beautiful thing I have read in a long time. I was crying reading it. I think it would be so special for children who are trying to understand why thier beloved dogdears have been taken from them. It would be a beautiful book; please have it published. I can imagine how lovely the illistrations would be. Please update us. Thank you!!!!!!
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06-22-2007, 11:09 AM
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Re: A fairy tale for my daughters when our Bryn passed
Lovely story, it would make a wonderful story book for children, I can just imagine how amazing it will be with illistrations.
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06-22-2007, 11:13 AM
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Re: A fairy tale for my daughters when our Bryn passed
I just read your story - AMAZING!!!! I'm crying like a baby.........
You have to publish it!!! My Mom has published 2 of her husband's books and several other ones. She also publishes a literary magaznie. If you're interested PM me. P.S. You should copy-right this (or whatever that stuff is.......). The language/style you use is very unique and needs to be protected!!!!!!
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