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Join Date: May 2009
Location: Waterloo, Ontario
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I got some "okay" stacked photo's today. I am still having issues with stacking him, I need to get a club member to help me do it properly..lol.
Anyways, critique away. I am curious to see how he is developing against the standard. 88lbs 26" at the withers Male - Intact - 25 months old ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
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Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Grand Rapids, MI
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Um yes please? Looks a bit east/west in front, maybe front feet could be better but I'm really nit-picking. This is the "type" of dog I really like. Great color and pigment, very masculine without being heavy. Nice coat without being too plus. Looks balanced, not over angulated. Soft, gentle expression.
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Join Date: Apr 2011
Location: Va Beach, VA
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I do not feel the angle of the photos are flattering to your dog. Try to take the photo from side on straight view.
As I see the things that do not change from photo to photo is, nice pigment, nice head, his front is east west, front feet a little flat possibly splayed wish they were a little higher and tighter like the rear paws. Pasterns a little to sloped for my taste but acceptable by most standards. Needs a little more height in whither and a little more croup. Shoulder looks slight to me and I would like to see better photos to better see this dog. Underline and rear look ok to me as well as length of body. |
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Crowned Member
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Waterloo, Ontario
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Thanks everyone.
![]() Lies, thank you for your critique, I take what you said as a great compliment and really appreciate it. GS6800, thank you for your critique also. I know the angle/photo's are not the best but it's as best as I have gotten so far..lol. Appreciate your critique a lot, I am trying my best to learn about structure, etc. so this helps. Thanks.
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Join Date: Jan 2009
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Nice head, withers a little flat, weak pasterns, nice body length, good pigment, front a little steep, rear would look better with a better stack, croup hard to identify, nice ear set, black muzzle, dark eyes. IMO, you would get a better review if the stack was better - front feet especially, back rear out too far.
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Crowned Member
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Connecticut
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Strong masculine head, pasterns look a little weak, strong pigment, nice ear set, easty westy, good weight/muscle.
Speaking just in terms of what I personally think... one of my favorite dogs on the board.
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Join Date: Jul 2010
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You have a very nice looking dog, but like a lot of nice looking dogs, he is less than perfect in the eyes of so-called experts. Also agree with Paul. You are brave to subject your dog to critique. More-so than I. Last edited by PaddyD; 05-24-2011 at 03:12 PM. |
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Illinois
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From what I see in your pictures, and PLEASE...do not take any critique from me as being negative to any person's dog...NO DOG IS PERFECT.
Stark is a large, strong, slightly stretched dog with a very masculine head, with a strikingly impressive mask. Normal wither, straight back, good positioned croup that should be longer. Very good top & bottom lines. Good front angulation, where the layback of the shoulder should be in better position. He has a short, steep upper arm. He has very good hind angulation. He turns his feet outward, which makes his front not correct. Pasterns could be tighter. *Special consideration should also be noticed to the extreme masculinity of this dog and his impressive pigmentation*. Nice dog!! ...again..this is just my personal opinion...
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